MY LAST SUMMER
My
last summer was so quiet. I didn't travell because on 2019 I'm going
to go with my familly to the U.S.A.💥 The only time I go out of My city
was just when I finished the school. I went with 3 friends in a
camping and we spent there a weekend. And on the first week of August
I went to la Bisbal to celebrate “la Festa Major” with all may
familly.😘 Without counting that I spend all the summer in Banyoles.
Every morning I went to the lake to train 🏊 until the last week of July.💪 In the first week of August I walised that the summer was going to end so early. So I decided to spend it as long as possible with my friends, and they made the last days of august, the best of all the summer. I know it's rare but we don't have the same age, but together we are the most carziest grup of friend ever.😋
One
week ago I did the “75a travessia de l'estany de Banyoles”.💦 I did
it with my friends, and we had a great day. When we finished “la
travessia” we went to have lunch together.
PRESENTATION
0-1
Did you use any resources? Yes
Were the resources focused on the topic? Yes
Did you show/talk about the photos to the audience? No
BODY LANGUAGE
AND EYE CONTACT
0-1
Did you look at your audience most of the time? Yes
Did you read from your notes? No
Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your
audience? No
STRUCTURE
0-1
Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? No
Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? No
(First, then, secondly, on the one hand, on the other hand, finally..)
Which ones?
CONTENT
0-4
Did you introduce interessting iformation to your audience? No
Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet/ books..?
(Specify) No
Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? superficial
LANGUAGE
0-2
Did you check your grammar?(verbs, word order...) yes
Did you use rich/new vocabulary looking up the dictionary? Yes
(synonyms/new words/expressions..) Which ones? walised
Did you use sentence linkers? Yes
(and, but,
moreover,also,furthermore,although,however...)
Did you use fillers? yes
(well,you know, for example, one second,
repeating a word...)
PRONOUNCIATION &
INTONATION
0-1
Did you know how to pronounce all your words? yes
Did you check the pronounciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the
teacher? no
Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone all the time? monotone
Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? fluid
SELF-EVALUATION
You are your teacher! What mark did you get? ;-) 7
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